RSW Week 11

RSW Week 11

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂    

 

And as of this Friday, my summer is officially over.  In terms of words, it’s been an incredibly productive summer.  I wrote a story I love with characters I adore, and really, what more can a girl ask for?

 

Week 11 Update:

 

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  Well, my goal was to find the “bigger hook” for my manuscript, which I’m not sure I did, but since all of this publishing business is subjective, it’s possible someone will think I did.  🙂  I revised exactly zero words but I spent a LOT of time thinking and plotting and letting ideas simmer.  I’m content with the decision I’ve decided to go in, so that’s something.

I also worked on finding hooks for other ideas I have brewing, or for things I’ve got 1st drafts on that need revisions, and came up with several one-two line pitches for them.  A few are really standing out and talking to me, so one will most likely become this year’s NaNo project.

I completed 8 recommendations letters, better than my goal of 5, so yay!  I’m at 10 total.

I’ve now completed one round of the 21 day fix, which I enjoyed but did not stick with 100%, particularly this last weekend.  I may have fallen off the wagon, but it won’t be hard to get back into the routine starting today and this is definitely something I can make happen while I’m back at work full time.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  Same as last week – revise the manuscript and write 5 letters.  I go back to work Friday (who makes employees return on a Friday?!) so it’ll be a challenge.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

I got nothing for ya this week in terms of new words.  Here’s a pitch, though, for a story that’s already written and needs some cleaning up.

When a state championship-bound swimmer catches his coach, who happens to also be his future sister-in-law, taking advantage of a new teammate, he must decide whether telling is worth ripping his team and his family apart.

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Always me.  This was the week my brain decided to actually take a vacation.  I watched a lot of bad TV, read some books, went shopping, but did not crack the WIP at all.  I figure since I worked my butt off every other week since the end of June, I probably needed and deserved the break.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   This is more in general, but I love that when I finish something I love, my brain presents me with another idea.  I’m always terrified that I won’t be able to keep this up, that the ideas will just dry up, but so far, that hasn’t been the case.  And this time around?  I’ve been hit with about 5 new ideas so now the problem is just picking one.

How did YOU do?

RSW Week 10

RSW Week 10

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂  

 

Week 9 Update:

 

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  Last week, my goal was the revise my recently completed YA contemp manuscript.  I got about halfway through and had all the intentions of finishing when my agent and I had a discussion about it needing a bigger hook to move forward with it.  So I paused revisions and have been plotting ever since.

I completed a whopping 2 recommendation letters, so not the 3 I was hoping for.

I also fell off the wagon a little with the 21 day fix, but stress will do that to you.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  Honestly, the only thing I care about right now is finding the elusive “bigger hook.”  I *think* I’m on the right track with an idea that will still tell the story I want to tell, but makes it a lot more interesting.  I’ve got a little less than 2 weeks until school starts, so at least having a direction and making some progress before then would be nice.

I need to have at least 5 letters done this week.

And I’d like to stay on the 21 day fix plan as best as I can this week.  This is week 3, gotta finish strong.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

This is THE END.  I don’t think it will be changing.

Theo slings an arm over my shoulder and scoots my chair, with me on it, close enough so our hips touch. “You know what Pop would say if he were here right now?”

I smile into Theo’s shoulder. “What would that wise wise man say?”

“He would ask us why we’re not eating cake right now.”

I laugh. “Then let’s go get some cake.”

 

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Myself, completely.  I get so emotionally attached to what I’ve written that changing gears is really difficult for me, even if I know in my head that it’s totally the right thing to do.  I tend to react immediately, and personally, when I really need to take a few days and marinate and wait for all the pieces to click together.  This happened to me with the book I got my agent with–I completely changed the ethnicity of a central family in the book and it altered, IMO, the whole feel of the book and made it much more universal.  But it took me a long time and waiting for mental clarity to come to that conclusion.  Hoping that the direction I’d like to go in is the right one this time too.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   That this new idea, this “hook,” might just make it what it’s supposed to be.

How did YOU do?

RSW Week 9

RSW Week 9

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂  

In depressing news, it’s now August and my simmer officially implodes in 3 weeks.  So sad.

Week 8 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  My only goal last week was to FINISH THE BOOK!  Which, thankfully, I did 🙂  Thursday I typed THE END on my contemporary dual POV YA novel LIFE IS WHAT HAPPENS and was so mentally exhausted afterwards, I flopped down on the couch and watched a few hours of truly embarrassing reality TV.  As one does.

Last week I mentioned I was going to try and branch out into writing WF, so I also typed up 2 fake query letters for ideas to send to my agent at some point.  The one keeps swirling and I plotted a little, picked out a few names, researched location, so that may be the keeper.

I also made is through the first week of the 21 Day Fix!

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  Start revisions on WIP.  I am historically a terrible reviser.  I’m really good at compartmentalizing and emotionally packing things away when they’re done, so going back and changing things is really difficult for me.  My brain keeps saying “But this is how it happened.  It’s already over. ”  I am grateful for my CPs and betas who can show me otherwise.  

I also want  play with a first chapter for one of my WF ideas, which I am lovingly calling the Dead Ex-Boyfriend Book, at the moment.

And *grumble grumble* I need to face the reality of recommendation letters.  I haven’t even looked at my materials to start writing them, so I should perhaps think about changing that.  A low bar – 3 letters done this week.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

Her white dress hugs her curves in all the right places and stops at her knee, showing off the legs I’ve been admiring for months. Her shit-kicker heels make her almost my height and I wonder how she can walk in them, but I’m glad, more than glad, she’s wearing them. They’re shiny and red and I hope she never takes them off. I move my eyes from her feet all the way up past the little white blazer to the top of her head. Her long hair is down and falls around her shoulders and right on top, like a cherry on a sundae, is a sparkly princess crown. I laugh to myself. Phoebe looks exactly like a dominatrix’s sweeter sister. Just as deadly, but she’ll kick your ass with a smile on her face.

And she is smiling at me.

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Actually getting through the end scenes I’ve had in my head for months was more of a challenge than I imagined.  I will miss these characters!

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   It makes me laugh and makes me cry.

How did YOU do?

RSW Week 8

RSW Week 8

 

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂  How are we starting week 8 already?!?! 

Week 7 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  So last week was all about busting my butt and writing as many words as I could.  In 3 days, I wrote just over 10,000 words, which is a recent record for me.  I’ve been doing dribs and drabs for months, so it felt good to really bang some words out and to know that I CAN produce if I push myself.  I was fully exhausted, but I did it.  I really wanted to have the draft done but I’m 2 or 3 scenes short of the end.  Not to worry, I will get it done this week for sure.

Last week was also successful because I got to meet my amazing agent in person for the first time at RWA, where I did not attend the conference but had a good time checking out the hotel and hanging out in New York for the second time this month. She was, as expected, super lovely and I was reminded of how lucky I am to have her on my side.  We decided that my book that’s been out on sub for almost a year is going to get shelved for the moment, I’ll continue with current WIP and hopefully ready that for sub in the near future, and I’ll play around with writing women’s fiction.  I’ve got 2 ideas that need some marinating and she likes both of them, thankfully.  Perhaps this year’s NaNo project if I can work out what I want to write.  While the idea of switching age groups is a little scary, it certainly opens up a new range of experiences I can tap into.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  Finish the WIP.  However many words that takes.  Less than 5K, I think.  Also, today I start the 21 Day Fix, so another goal is to stick with the plan.  I like that there’s so much community built in to the program so I’m hopeful I’ll be able to follow through.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

There is nothing that prepares you for losing the person you love the most in the world.  The person who loves you the most.  Sure, the proverbial “they” always talk about having a hole in your heart but losing Pop just confirms that that idea is complete bullshit.  It’s not a hole.  It’s like someone fired a Revolutionary War style cannon into my heart and ripped it clean out of my body.  A gaping cavern where my heart used to be and the rest of my important life-sustaining parts ready to jump rather than go down with a sinking ship.  The appropriate term would be gutted.  I am gutted that Pop is gone and I will never see him again.

 

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Not much.  I was determined to beat the distractions and I did.  Now to keep up the momentum…..

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   As is probably obvious from the excerpt, I killed a character this week.  And the minute I wrote the words where he died, I started crying.  I’m hoping that emotional attachment is felt by the reader as well.

How did YOU do?

 

RSW Week 7

RSW Week 7

 

 

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂

Week 6 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  It’s amazing what you can do when you set the bar low.  I wanted 2000 words and surprised myself by getting 3000, so yay!  I also made my goal of 2 trips to the gym.  We were in NYC for my daughter’s surprise birthday trip, which was totally amazing, and ended up walking about 22 miles in 3 days, so I’m counting that as an exercise win as well.  I also ordered the materials to start the 21 Day Fix, so I’ll get started on that probably next week when I have all the stuff.

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2.  My goal(s) for this week:  A very loft goal – finish the draft by Wednesday night.  I’ll need probably 9-10K for this, I think, so I’m really suspending all activity and just writing.  Why am I doing this?  Because I get to meet my agent in person on Friday (!!! and back to NYC for a quick adult trip) and I want to be able to talk about this with her.  She knows about it, has blessed the idea, but it will be great to have something complete.  Fingers crossed.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

I head into the kitchen and press play on our ancient answering machine that Dad insists on keeping with our ridiculous landline “in case the power goes out.”

Mom’s voice crackles. “Hi Theo, this is your mother.” No shit. “I know you’re so excited to talk about college with me, but I met a professor at the farmer’s market the other day and mentioned how brilliant you are.” She probably embellished to make herself look good. “He told me he knows some people in admissions up here and would be happy to talk to them on your behalf if you’re interested. Said sometimes they’re willing to consider late applications. Just think about it okay. And call me.” She air kisses into the phone and then the message clicks off.

My mother has sunk to new lows by discussing me with total strangers. There’s no way I’m calling her back or spending any time thinking about the stupid favor she’s calling in. No, Mother, I will not do this just because you want. There is absolutely nothing wrong with me not going to college right away if that’s what I want. And there’s also nothing wrong with me not knowing what I want. And if I don’t figure it out until I’m forty and make lattes for bratty high school kids while I marinate on my life’s purpose, so be it. I’m so sick of this being in my face all the freaking time.

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  As always, just time.  And being distracted by everything else shiny around me.  I’m determined to beat it this week.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   Right now, I’m excited that it’s almost done and that I can go back and revise, lol.

How did YOU do?

 

RSW Week 6

RSW Week 6

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂

Week 6 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  Derailed!  I got sick Monday night and it took the entire week to recover.  I managed to get about 2500 words, thankfully, and I’m pleased about that, but no gym, no 7 min workout, and no letter prepping.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  We’re taking our little one on a surprise trip to NYC for her 5th birthday M-W, so my time is limited this week.  I’ll shoot low and say 1000 words and 2 trips to the gym.  My BIG goal is to have my draft done by next Thursday 7/23 but I’ll have to bust my booty next week to make that happen.  I’m thinking I’m about 15K away.  I’ve also rationalized that I can start my letter writing the last week of July and still finish on time, so that’s a relief.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

KISSING!

In a flash, before I realize what he’s doing, Theo is standing on top of the hardwood seat on his side of the booth. “Can I have everyone’s attention for a second?” Oh god. I want to slide to the floor. This is not what I had in mind. I squint up at him, his arms stretched out not unlike when he’s doing a magic show. “I just want to take a moment of your time and let everyone present know that I like Phoebe Lennox.” He puts heavy emphasis on the like so there is no way to misunderstand what he means. “We’re here on our first date tonight and it’s going swimmingly.” Our waiter whoops from the front of the room and a few diners, the ones who aren’t totally confused or annoyed, start clapping. “Just thought you all should know. Hope your evening is as great as ours.” He gives a half-wave, half-salute to the room, steps onto the floor and sits back down just as some clever patron begins clinking their knife on their water glass. The sound gets louder as my cheeks get redder. Theo’s brow furrows. “Why are they doing that?”

I barely choke my words out. “It’s what you do at weddings when you want the bride and groom to kiss.”

“Oh.” Still squinting because I can’t bare to look at him fully or I might combust, I watch Theo slide out of the booth again, stand in front of my side and offer me a hand. “We can’t disappoint our audience, now can we?”

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Sick sick sick.  It’s hard to be productive when you can’t keep your eyes open.  It’s annoying to have lost so many days but I did my best.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   Did I mention there was kissing this week?  I always have a romantic element to my books, some much stronger than others, but I tend to save the kissing for the very end for some reason.  THIS book has kissing earlier and I’m so glad, even though I know conflict is coming and soon.

How did YOU do?

RSW Week 5

RSW Week 5

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂

Week 5 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  a very successful week, I am pleased to report.  I cracked 5,000 words in my WIP, which was more than I wrote the entire month of June I think, so yay!  I’m also in the place where I’m beginning to see the end.  It’s still a little bit away but it’s not too far off.  I also completed the 7 minute workout 5 times and went to the gym 5 times.  Boo.  Yeah.  I did not prep for any recommendation letters, though I can’t really say I’m sad about that.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  Same as last week – 500 words a day or more M-F.  Prep for at least 3 recs.  Go to the gym 5/7 days and do the 7 min workout 5/7 days.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

Content is a watered-down version of happy. Most people want to live their life being blissfully happy, don’t they? They want to feel fulfilled in their choices and by the people around them. One hundred percent certain that they did what they were meant to do. At least, that’s what I’ve always thought.

“That sounds like settling, Grandpa. No offense, but being content is not my goal.”

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Honestly, not much?  I’m officially on summer break and everyone else in my house is either at work or camp, so I’ve got as much peace and quiet as I need to get work done.  That said, I do have the procrastination disease (hello social media) and will sometimes put things off until it’s too late in the day to do them.  Mostly I’ve been really good about writing first thing and then exercising or vice versa.  After lunch I save for other things.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   It challenges me.  I’m writing dual POV, male and female, and my female is very much not like me and not like many people I know IRL.  She’s hard to wrap my head around and I have to really think hard about what she would say or do.  It’s pushing me to be a more thoughtful writer.

How did YOU do?

RSW Week 4

RSW Week 4

I’m working my way through Ready, Set Write! this summer 🙂

Week 4 Update:

1.  How I did on last week’s goals:  Thank you to everyone who has been thinking good productive thoughts for me!  I made great use of my travel time last week AND my first day of summer vacay Friday and got a solid 3500 words.  I am so pleased and feeling a lot more confident going into my first full week of break.  I also prepared for writing my college recs and downloaded a new fitness app–7 MWC (7 minute workout)–and started that Saturday.

2.  My goal(s) for this week:  500 words a day or more M-F.  Prep for at least 3 recs.  Go to the gym 5/7 days and do the 7 min workout 5/7 days.

3.  A favorite line from my story OR one word/phrase that sums up what I wrote/revised.

“So. What’s going on? We don’t see you around these parts much.” I gesture to the stacks of books surrounding us. “Contemplating a career in academia?”

“I was thinking bodybuilding actually. These fuckers are heavy. I could have a six pack in about a week hauling these things around.”

4.  The biggest challenge I faced this week (ex. finding time to write):  Time and lack of structure.  I was bound by someone else’s schedule last week so I basically had to make due with the little time I had.  Luckily for me, the lack of wi-fi on the plane and the ridiculously long time it took my hotel to tell me my room was clean worked in my favor.

5.  Something I love about my WiP:   It’s funny.  A CP read the first half this week and 95% of her comments were laughter.

 

Another thank you to everyone who cheered me on last week and left me comments – it helped tremendously.  I’ll be commenting back this week for sure!

 

 

NaNoWriMo 2014 Wrap-Up

NaNoWriMo 2014 Wrap-Up

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So it’s been a week since NaNoWriMo ended for this year and I am pleased to report that I “won” for the third year in a row.  And, a gigantic improvement over last year, I don’t hate my manuscript!  NaNoWriMo will always hold a special place in my heart because it was the thing that got me writing seriously.  And now, with 3 under my belt, I enjoy sharing it with my students and writing friends.

 

Writing 50,000 words (or more for you overachievers) in 30 days can be a very daunting task, so here are some things that work for me, in case you’re interested in trying (or trying again) with me next November:

 

1.  Give yourself a head start.  I am very fortunate that my job has some time built-in at the beginning of every November for me to do as I please.  I now spend it writing.  My first Nano, I holed up at a coffee shop for 2 days and banged out 10K.  Last year and this year, I went on retreat with three of my critique partners and got 12K and 13K respectively.  If you know what you want to write ahead of time, and you eliminate whatever your personal distractions are for a day or two (use a sick day perhaps, if your schedule permits it), you’ll be amazed at how many words you can write.

 

2.  Plan ahead.  I’m not a detailed outliner, but I do like to make notes and mull things over before beginning a new draft.  Last year, I had a very loose idea of plot points and spent too much time figuring out my characters’ names.  This year, I let my ideas and my characters marinate for about two weeks, and didn’t write anything else in that time, and took notes in Scrivener as the ideas came to me.  I think making decisions about characters and their personalities/motivations was the most useful.  When I got stuck, I had something to fall back on.  Which year was more successful?  2014, by far.  My lack of planning in 2013 really took its toll on the story.

 

3.  Research in advance.  Even if you’re creating a world entirely from scratch, there’s gotta be something you need to google to help you out.  This year I wrote a book about swimming.  I’ve never been on a swim team and haven’t taken a lesson in over 20 years.  So I interviewed 2 experts – a student-athlete and a coach – for over 5 hours and took copious notes.  I also read a number of documents online about various related topics.  I saved items I knew I would need in Scrivener, but the process of talking about these ideas with experts was invaluable, so I rarely had to refer to the notes.  Just talking put me in the right mindset.  And, it saved me valuable time during November.

 

4.  Rely on friends.  Nano should never be a solitary experience.  Even if your critique partners or fellow writers aren’t participating, just letting them know that YOU are helps you be accountable.  I spent time with writing friends both in person and online, both of which got me really amped up about reaching my goal.

 

5.  Reward yourself.  50,000 words is a lot.  Just under 1,700 words a day is daunting, especially in a month where many people travel for several days or have family obligations more than normal.  Make yourself feel good about what you do accomplish.  I give myself stars for every 500 words written.  November looks pretty impressive on paper!  I also tend to reward myself with more coffee, which can be both a good and a bad thing.

 

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That’s it.  Piece of cake, right?  Sure.  If I can do it, you can do it.

 

I’m always on the look out for new tips – what helped you get through November this year?

Cover Reveal: BETWEEN EVERYTHING AND US by Rebecca Paula

Cover Reveal: BETWEEN EVERYTHING AND US by Rebecca Paula

Friends – today I’m celebrating the reveal of the GORGEOUS cover of my amazing critique partner’s new book.  Without further ado, here it is!

 

 

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Title: Between Everything And Us

Author: Rebecca Paula

Genre: New Adult

Release Date: January 20, 2015

Cover Design: Maggie Hall

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Synopsis

Matisse Evans is determined to make her sophomore year of college successful after failing out of a prestigious art school and spending a horribly boring gap year at home. Despite her focus, time isn’t on her side as she struggles to hold down three jobs so she can afford her first apartment while juggling course work. In the chaos of it all, Beau Grady moves in and shakes up her world. A college dropout and tattooed bad boy, the rumors about Beau mean one thing for Matisse—trouble. Paralyzed by the fear that she’s missing out on life, Matisse discovers plans may unravel, but what rises in their wake can be worth the uncertainty.

After spending the summer couch surfing, Beau Grady moves into an empty room at his ex-girlfriend’s Portland bungalow, skipping his senior year of college to spend his days working at a Vietnamese food cart instead. Once a star hockey player and gifted student, he’s put his life on hold after receiving a life-altering diagnosis, complacent to live in the moment. Hiding behind false rumors and bad habits, Beau falls for Matisse, letting her believe the worst until their relationship blooms into something they both can’t ignore. Falling for her means having to face a future he’d rather forget, but loving her just might be worth it.

Excerpt

She grabs my hands and pins them together. I don’t fight off her touch. I let Mati gather them and raise them above my head. “I think it’s so easy to fall into the world when you’re not ready,” she says seriously. Her free hand brushes over my brows, then sweeps down my nose. “It’s such a big place and we’re all very tiny in the scheme of things.”

“What are you trying to say?”

“It sucks being an outlier, Beau. I get it. But in spite of everything, we’re always going to feel a bit lost. It’s the part of growing up that no one ever tells you about.”

“You’re very wise today, Miss Mati.”

“I’m lots things, mister. I’m…” Her voice drops off and she nervously glances down at my chest. “I think I’m a little bit in love with you actually.”

At least I’m sitting. That doesn’t help the way my stomach drops though.

I snake my hands out of her grip and brace them around her face. There’s a reason why outliers exist on the outside—they can’t find their way in.

Mati is no outlier to me.

We kiss for what seems like hours. I don’t care if it’s for days. But we kiss until my mouth wipes away the nervousness in that confession of hers, while I still cowardly hide behind mine.

In the wild, in the sun, Mati and I are…well, we’re something I never thought I’d have or find. And that’s everything.

 

About The Author

Rebecca

It began with a boy who survived a plane crash in the wilderness.

I discovered my love of writing during a fifth grade writing assignment for Hatchet. After that, I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Always the hopeless romantic, I write late Victorian and Edwardian historical romances as well as contemporary New Adult romances.

I am a member of Romance Writers of America (RWA), as well as the New Hampshire chapter (NHRWA) and the New England chapter (NECRWA). I contribute regularly to the Modern Belles of History blog, a site dedicated to writing, reading, and researching 20th century women’s historical fiction.

When I’m not writing, I’m most likely reading or daydreaming about my next travel adventure. I live in New Hampshire with my husband and our cat, Bella.

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